Monday, September 7, 2009

This Is My Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

soft waft on my skin
dewdropp on my cheeks
reminds me of the time
immature and childish..
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lady grace
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Rafique Farooqi 22 September 2009

Sweet memories with..........emerging abrupt changes......well done grace......

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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009

yo recibir................

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Miriam Maia Padua 21 September 2009

this is life... so complete... a combination of joy, happiness, pain and sorrow builds a beautiful life... ...life is really beautiful...the evidence of God's greatest love to us... the Gift of life.. 10+++ lovelots, Maia

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2009

sometimes life changes gradually or ends abruptly… unexpected but I assure... life is beautiful it is very very beautiful depending on how to accept it..life is God's greatest and kind gift and no one has right to end it.. we must face bravely and accept the way it has been granted to us... pray always for what HE has done to us.......10 read mine o, lord...prayer....prayer for friend

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Ravi Sathasivam 14 September 2009

Well expressed poem about joy of life. Lovely to read it Enjoyed. Thanks

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Noel Horlanda 09 September 2009

I admit I experienced this too...not only the two of us but i guess everybody has ups and downs in life. That's life of course, you can't get away from it. Wonderful lines, realistic.

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Ency Bearis 08 September 2009

a nice life embrace....a beautiful poem indeed.....10

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Obinna Eruchie 08 September 2009

Memories of joy delightfully expressed.

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Fay Slimm 08 September 2009

A beautiful expression of joy in life - - and you write with a flair - a delight to read - - thank you.....10 + ++ Fay

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Eyan Desir 08 September 2009

Happy celebration of life... This is a beautiful poem Well written. Grace As always 10 Its your life live it right Keep smiling

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Sarwar Chowdhury 07 September 2009

The 'me' in this poem echoing many lives! beautiful wording! the last line encompassed all......... 10+

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