Monday, November 26, 2012

This Is Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Starts like the rising big sun offering everyone much
Too many, glooms, pleasures, chances such,
Runs smoothly, hard, soft, busy or free,
Find few fairies, few fly to bare tree,
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Jahan Zeb
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Hazel Durham 02 December 2012

A very optimistic, uplifting poem with great rhythm and flow! Inspired write!

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Poetheart Morgan 26 November 2012

Like the style! ! ! ! Bravo Jahan! ! !

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Unwritten Soul 26 November 2012

you make the arrangement so nice in amazing chords from longest to smaller then cut to be only two words the rhyme? is excellent..absolutely nice from you and the meaning..it can catch us to continue for all lines merged as one perfect way so this is an excellent write i can say keep it up write more dear Jahan _Soul

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Unwritten Soul 26 November 2012

you make the arrangement so nice in amazing chords from longest to smaller then cut to be only two words the rhyme? is excellent..absolutely nice from you and the meaning..it can catch us to continue for all lines merged as one perfect way so this is an excellent write i can say keep it up write more dear jahan _Soul

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Kelvin Owusu 26 November 2012

love the structure of this piece great job

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Jahan Zeb

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