Sunday, October 14, 2012

This Is Her Comments

Rating: 4.8

The pain that bleeds through my eyes is the pain that was caused by lies.
The lies that you materialized to cover up your bad side.
its the bad side that i need to see
for if i cant handle you at your worst i don't deserve you at your best.
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Christon SykesSmith
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Romeo Della Valle 14 October 2012

Outburst of the heart magically blended in this well crafted write, sad but powerful! Chiston, we all being there but we had no choice but to move on with our lives! You are young and strong and must not let bitter moments of life to get you stocked in the past! Time to move on! Your talent is clearly shown in this fine write! Let the music play and the dead rest in peace! 10-+++ Thank you for sharing and keep it up! Poetry is your best escape route! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City

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