Thursday, January 12, 2012

This Is Goodbye Comments

Rating: 3.0

Who would have thought the day would come, when I'd look at you and say, 'I'm sorry, but you're not 'The One'.'
You're not the one who will make me laugh, you're not the my life, my world, my other half. You're not about to be the shoulder I cry on.
I've known for a while now, but baby I'm done.
I'm done with you're games and all you're lies.
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christane darling
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Sandy Player 11 January 2013

its worded the doubt and disbelieve of when it comes to that moment. very intense, yet softening. great

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A Lifetime Of Fame 17 January 2012

Wow. I can feel where you are coming from. Very nice

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Francy Lowachee 12 January 2012

This poem was really good.. I was thinking if I was the guy this was said to I'd be speech less.. :)

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Robert Roberts 12 January 2012

sweet writing i like that but the say love is blind and that everyone needs a try right but we move on and we get up after we fall down. nice write

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Brianna Winebarger 12 January 2012

good. sad and heat felt

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Kelsey Phillips 12 January 2012

i love your poem it almost made me cry everything will be okay

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