Friday, August 2, 2019

This Imagined Ocean Comments

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This imagined ocean floods my rowboat in throbs
pounding up through a hole I can't locate
to the screeching rhythm of gulls enjoying my misery.
My hundred-year-old rowboat, beat to hell
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Jenny Kalahar
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Hassan Hayati 04 August 2019

I am not a native English speaker, I really learn. thanks for sharing this piece.

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Jenny Kalahar 04 August 2019

So happy you enjoyed it, Hassan! - -Jenny

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Kostas Lagos 02 August 2019

Beautifully written!

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Jenny Kalahar 02 August 2019

Thanks so much, Kostas! - Jenny

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Julia Luber 02 August 2019

Interesting imaginative piece daring to claim everything is just the effect its material has upon the state of your mind.

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Jenny Kalahar 02 August 2019

Thank you, Julia! This wasn't the direction I intended to take the poem, but it seemed to want to direct itself, as poems often do. - Jenny

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Jenny Kalahar

Jenny Kalahar

Washington, USA
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