Monday, August 24, 2009

This I Believe (My 1st Tib Essay) Comments

Rating: 5.0

I believe that ultimately the paradoxes of life make fools of us all. So, if we would be wise, we should study life’s paradoxes and confront our abject foolishness head on.
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Kasey Graham 26 June 2010

This was your most powerful piece thus far. Amazing prose, well written. I love this piece. Your talent for words is clear in this piece.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 03 September 2009

I like the philosopy of life that you believe. 'I believe that one ought to live their life in such a way as to maximize its total experience' I agree with this: 'no person ought to waste the one life they have to live with regrets they there were flavors they didn't taste, aromas they didn't inhale, and sensations they did not feel.. Good write and thought-provoking, too. I rate what you believe a 10

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Nashy Lamen 28 August 2009

Beautiful write.. I have been captivated by how you express your thoughts on life.. How we waste opportunities and how we live it.. It is very persuasive and deep.. Nice choice of words... Keep it up!

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Julia Pascual 28 August 2009

A very very fascinating write.. if only all people believe in what you believe... then there would be no problems at all... i like the way you make others see the beauty in life... great write... again.. =)

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Sue S. 24 August 2009

I set my heading by my passions, but let my intellect steer my ship. Wow - that's one line I wished I had written! !

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Georgia Girl 24 August 2009

This is FANTASTIC and I agree but you have to admit there is poetic beauty in the has beens of life :)

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