Wednesday, December 19, 2007

This House Is No Longer A Home Comments

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As I walk down the lonely street
Knees get weak, can barely keep my feet
I see the fence, the gate, the porch
From where you gazed and lit my torch
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Alfred Ramos
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Anjali Mandokhot 19 December 2007

its straight from the heart.....u said u loosely compare it to my'leave me a vacant house'......bt u actually penned my fears in that....nd it looks like a sequel....wanting a intermediate part describing the sunny days too...yet urs is far more beautiful in diction and thoughts

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Brian Mills 19 December 2007

what a heartfelt write here that you have graciously composed........true feelings from the heart.......thnx for sharing.....keep ur head up buddy! ! Brian~

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Ronald Stroman 19 December 2007

a divided doesn't stand. you're correct. take care.

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