Thursday, May 30, 2019

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As winters pass the rivers flow,
Diamond-like the shallows glow,
Each nook n cranny that rushes by,
A pass is left when it all turns dry.
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Sarah Persson
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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 May 2019

your final stanza here: A fortune held within this earth, A home with sentimental worth, To every creature, big or small, For all to share, for all to enthrall...............Most beautiful conclusion, loveliest worded. I have enjoyed very much! Thank you so much for sharing. God's Blessings in Abundance for you and your beloved family. Amen. A 10.

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Sarah Persson 30 May 2019

Thank you so much Sylvia for your lovely comments, it's always such a pleasure when somebody enjoys my words. Thank you

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