Tuesday, September 19, 2017

This Highway Is Up To Heaven Comments

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Very clean this highway is very long,
Curved in a zigzag manner this invites,
Dawn on arrival welcomes creatures,
Visitors have their journey in this way.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Pushpendra Patel 01 March 2019

Travelling towards heaven is interesting. Greatest happiness we get remaining with God. We search for eternal happiness and we get this. God teaches us righteousness. Thank you very much for sharing this. You are a nice poet. This poem is excellent poem.

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Michael Walker 08 March 2018

I sincerely hope that you are right, as I want to travel the highway to heaven one day. I like your photo of a curved road with glowing clouds in the evening sky. I wonder where that highway leads to.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 October 2017

Clean and long! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Mj Lemon 19 September 2017

Terrific imagery....for me, the images in that very first stanza really stand out. I can see all creatures making one trek- together. Great poem, Kumarmani.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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