This Heart Of Mine.. Comments

Nice piece of work. Yes, life is full of many negative things. All the same, let us all try to do the right thing always. E.K.L.

A very heartfelt write. The heart is the center of all emotions. Your poem has a good tune to it. Inspired.

This could be put to music and make you famous someday. Nice write.

I like the rythmn in this one, and the repeat lines. Very good job.

I like the way your poem rhymes, and like the expressions u chose :)