This Heart Comments

Beautiful rendition of words elegantly brought forth with artistic brilliance. Powerful and lofty verse conveying deep emotions with clarity of thought and mind. A wonderful creation. Thanks for sharing Stella and do remain enriched.

Impassioned, and poignant work, young lady.Your choice not to employ stanzaec stucture works well here, as you negotiate each line, smoothly, & mellifluously in cascade.Solid crafting, Stella. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

Thank you for sharing this, a very keen insight into the struggle and contrasts within and on a journey of life. thank you.