Friday, January 2, 2009

This Happens Every Day Comments

Rating: 5.0

I drink my morning coffee, and there you are.
It always happens just then.

My whole world, it stops
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Beverley Katherine
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Pensive Phoenix 21 March 2009

Wonderful expression and flow. I'd give this a 10.

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Laurie Hill 28 January 2009

You must be in love..............lovely poem

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John Fieldson 14 January 2009

I concur with your other reader's comments

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Raj Arumugam 03 January 2009

This is a lovely love poem... You've got a very interesting style of putting your thoughts in very concrete form...

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