Saturday, February 7, 2009

This Great Storm(For Junie) Comments

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My heart nothing but
an onion skin thin

sheet of paper
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Dónall Dempsey
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Scarlett Treat 13 February 2009

That wonderfully delicate onion skin heart! How well I know that territory, of thinking I must have something to hold it down...or the slightest wind will rip it apart! Well Said, DDD....well said! !

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Original Unknown Girl 10 February 2009

Gosh.... this is a heavy one. I love the metaphors though, I love storms and of course I love any poetry connected with the angst of romance. This is wonderful. Are you writing the thoughts of my heart Donall? ? ? HG: -) xx

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Dónall Dempsey

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Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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