Sunday, November 13, 2005

This Girl Comments

Rating: 4.5

This Girl In The Dark
Has a beautiful face without a name
And a beautiful smile to hide the pain
This Girl In the Dark
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Julie Bond
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Imani/Jayden 27 August 2020

This is a poem that relates very much to me

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Lia Stroud 22 February 2010

That's a really good poem, it reminds me of myself

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Sarah Chapman 14 November 2006

This is so sad but really good as well. and if you keep lookin inside then you find your path and you light

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Iva Wells 15 August 2006

i agree with Cecil Hickman and Tai Chi Italy of what they said about your poem its a good poem but sad to and to tell you one thing keep it up because this one was really good

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Cecil Hickman 11 February 2006

even though this was sad it is written very very well I can see in your words the pain that you feel.

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***** ********* 21 December 2005

This poem has good rhythm Julie, and a great deal of honesty too. 10 from Tai wishing you a merry christmas

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Ellz Bellz 13 December 2005

wow. you are truelly talented.

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