This Girl In The Dark
Has a beautiful face without a name
And a beautiful smile to hide the pain
This Girl In the Dark
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This is so sad but really good as well. and if you keep lookin inside then you find your path and you light
i agree with Cecil Hickman and Tai Chi Italy of what they said about your poem its a good poem but sad to and to tell you one thing keep it up because this one was really good
even though this was sad it is written very very well I can see in your words the pain that you feel.
This poem has good rhythm Julie, and a great deal of honesty too. 10 from Tai wishing you a merry christmas
This is a poem that relates very much to me