Wednesday, September 6, 2006

This Gentle Hush Comments

Rating: 5.0

Concealed on the edge of a sunlit pool,
An old mill performs its daily chore,
Its wheel rotating like an enormous spool,
Water churning with a clamorous roar
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Ernestine Northover
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Chuck Audette 09 September 2006

Wbat a beautiful place you've painted us here, I wouldn't mind that place being my daily grind. -chuck

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Duncan Wyllie 06 September 2006

I love your beautiful style in this, and in general You have a wonderful gift, infact...you have many wonderful gifts Love duncan XXX

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Tailor Bell 06 September 2006

marvelous read. beautiful. -Tailor

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Joe Breunig 06 September 2006

A delightful write; the peaceful and gentle hush has been gracefully presented.

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Mary Nagy 06 September 2006

What a beautifully peaceful poem Ernestine! A well needed peace today! So glad to have read it. Sincerely, Mary

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