Friday, September 1, 2017

This Generation... Comments

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What a world we live in
Where things we do, everything
Is questionable by a being
Not supreme, but a mere living.
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McGeorge Jeremiah
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Jefferson Carter 02 September 2017

McGeorge, a coupla good lines here but, boy, you really distort English syntax by forcing all those rhymes! Maybe you should read some good contemporary poets, like Billy Collins or Terrance Hayes, that is, if you're interested in improving as a poet. if you have time, check out my new website: jeffersoncarterverse.com Tell me how you like it. Yrs, JC

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Joshua Adeyemi 01 September 2017

Wickedness had made league with strife and they a couple drowned love in the ocean of the world.

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