Sunday, September 29, 2019

This Fractured World Cannot Be Fixed Comments

Rating: 3.0

I sense the broken cries of millions across
This purgatorial world of constant sorrow.
The metal rain pelts the oppressed from wounded skies.
There are stones at hand for every bigot to throw.
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Sankaran Ayya 29 September 2019

I see love and mercy turn into pale shadows. I hear the raven's triumphant shriek of laughter. I feel the weight of the gods' wrath and angels' grief. - - perfectly you said bravo Domnic

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KAVIN CHARALAN 29 September 2019

I see love and mercy turn into pale shadows. I hear the raven's triumphant shriek of laughter. I feel the weight of the gods' wrath and angels' grief. - - -PERFECTLY YOU SAID. BRAVO

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Dominic Windram 29 September 2019

Thanks for your positive comments. I very much appreciate them!

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