Thursday, July 13, 2006

This Feeling Of Being... Comments

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My stomach is rumbling
With fork and spoon I am fumbling
While I stare at the diners mingling.
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Ashish R 24 July 2006

lol...nice poem.just some feelings that i also go thru when i am at the restaurant(very very hungry) and the waiter seems to be serving everybody except me. Very well done. Ashish

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Colleen Wright 24 July 2006

Preeti - your words of expression and story are indeed a great treasure to me. Thank you also for your comments re my words in poem it is great that you so understand and I am not on my own. Colleen.

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Brian Dorn 13 July 2006

Preeti, great ending to a great poem, I think those feelings apply to soooooo many things we hunger for. And, speaking of food... well done! ! Brian

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Francesca Johnson 13 July 2006

I understand the frustration in this poem...but now I am absolutely starving! ! Could murder a couple of samosas right now.......ooh Hungry Fran xx

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David Darbyshire 13 July 2006

Please: panipuri, Pasta, pav bhaji and chicken tandoori. for two dave

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