Monday, June 15, 2015

This Feeling Inside Without You Here Comments

Rating: 4.6

Tell me how to stop this pain
It hurts so bad it's driving me insane
I feel lost, I don't know where to go
Everything is tumbling down and my heart stops to flow
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Melissa Patty
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Melissa S Clampitt 07 August 2022

O I lost my mom whn I was 18 yrs old we got into a car wreck n I was with her so I couldn't say my good byes n it still hurt me now in tht was on 2003

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Sylvia Frances Chan 30 July 2018

Congratulations for you as Member Poem Of the Day! Hurray! and WOW! Most Beautiful Tribute! . A 10+++++++ for the vote

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Akhtar Jawad 23 July 2018

The emotions and sentiments of a loving daughter flow throughout like a sad tune of a violin, the reader starts to paint a portrait of her mother in his mind, how great was the mother and how loving is the daughter. A very good selection as Members Poem, congrats!

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 23 July 2018

A mum becomes dearer, fonder, nearer and even prettier when she leaves us for ever. We all feel the same as you for the mother. Thanks for sharing the lovely thoughts. Congrats for the well deserved positioning.

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Kelly Kurt 23 July 2018

I miss my parents too. I don't think I have written about that. You have inspired me to think. Congrats, Melissa.

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Chan Mongol 23 July 2018

The poet has constructed the poem with her best inner feelings. I love the rhythm, rhymes and the poem deserves ++++10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 July 2018

Is the love I have for you is truly sincerely I wish I had the power to bring you back again...........strong desire expressed touchingly. It is really a great tribute to mother beautifully executed. Thanks and congratulations for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.

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Magdalena Biela 23 July 2018

Dearest Melissa, don't ask why me? , just write, write to her, about her, for her, for SHE is alive as long as you carry her memory in your heart, in your poems...Remember e.e. cunning: i carry your heart / i carry it with my heart...Many children loose parents before their time and they find a way to keep them alive...You have poetry...Why you? Nobody knows, only the Heaven...Be happy and congratulations for today your poem and your Mother are the poem of the day...All my heart...

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Bernard F. Asuncion 23 July 2018

Such a heartfelt expression of love of a daughter to her beloved mother who is already gone... congrats for being chosen, Melissa...10++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 23 July 2018

Oh; kindred affectionate pain penetrates the heart vigorously! lovely written from the heart of souvenir..........10++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 23 July 2018

I have such a Mum too, my late Mum, my still beloved late Mum, and as years go by, we will NEVER forget her, but we will mourn in grief about her constantly, like you are doing still. I know these emotive feelings, I just KNOW them and your most heart wrenching poem says it all. Grateful to God that I have met this poem and have read. Congratulations for you as Member Poem Of the Day! Hurray! and WOW! Most Beautiful Tribute!

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Judith Your Mentor 23 July 2018

This poem lacks sincerity. I was surprised I made it to POD with this particularly with all my identies on this site. Oh well deja vu.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 July 2018

All I want is happiness to love and share Sometimes I think to myself Why me? Having this feeling inside is always with me wherever I may be I miss you dearly.......such a loving mom blessed to have such a loving daughter..... thank u for this poem of love and gratitude and prayer. tony

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