This Feeling Comments

Half past noon, not a minute late, grasp it in my hand, but wait. My only friend, my best friend, who I know will be with me till the end. Heart races, faster and faster, quicker pace, closer and closer. its a time bonded poem and the sequence you did for is wonderful, time demanding and impressive..innovation is foudn there and thoughtful idea inspires hearts and souls..well done and its really a good and perfect poem..10/10

This is a highly emotional write up, conveying the feelings in powerful words.

a very amazing write i luved it 10+++

I'm greeted by God, I feel, love, appreciation, no neglect, I kneel. it is true feeling with deepest faith in HIM..lovely poem... read mine.. o, lord..prayer..prayer for friend...go back

Could it be me or is your poem dark and depressive to the point of revealing not only neglect but child abuse in the most horrific way? ~Dave~

thats was very good there is no bitter joy then blood runing down your arm

You have a bold and honest writing style. Your feelings here are clear and can not be denied.

Well expressed feeling my friend...the flow breaks down in places..but that's fine..I like that....gives it a tone when reading and feeling this piece...well done