Tuesday, June 9, 2009

This 'Family' So They Call Comments

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Born as a child, we've come to know
This 'family' so they call
With whom we'll spend majority of life
It's a 'yes ‘ mandatory state
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Danzen D...
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Nashy Lamen 01 July 2009

Hmmm.. Inspired by the orphanage? ? ... Very well written... Strong emotions, .. full of surpassed obstacles.. c:

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Lorena Cruz 11 June 2009

It takes a lot of courage to utter such words.. to simply accept mistakes.. good one DAn Dan..

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Joseph Poewhit 09 June 2009

I think you captured the ways of many, in realizing the unity of familyy. If no family WHAT? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Marieta Maglas 09 June 2009

''I apologized for the things I've done For shouting back like mad For seeming to ignore their wise advice Even though, by heart, I learned...'' very mature....keep writing...10++

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