This is me this is who and what I am
This is me throwing my toys out of the pram
This is me trying so very hard to be better
This is me shaking as I type in this letter
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Your use repetition is very effective and emphasizes that the darkness that runs through the poem is being felt by you. I love the mood and darkness that is expressed throughout. A well written rhyme, well done! !
If this poem is about you, I know how you feel. Great poem!