Friday, February 5, 2010

This End Comments

Rating: 5.0

This is me this is who and what I am
This is me throwing my toys out of the pram
This is me trying so very hard to be better
This is me shaking as I type in this letter
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Gordon David
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Jenna Johnston 23 October 2013

If this poem is about you, I know how you feel. Great poem!

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Sachi Patel 05 February 2010

Your use repetition is very effective and emphasizes that the darkness that runs through the poem is being felt by you. I love the mood and darkness that is expressed throughout. A well written rhyme, well done! !

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Gordon David

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