Monday, April 8, 2013

This Earth's Tiny Plot Comments

Rating: 5.0

Oh’ how rolls that deep blue sea
What tales it could tell you and me
Its constant rolling, its breaking spray
In the moonlight at the end of the day.
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Joan Smith 05 May 2013

Another nice reflection of this poets mind. He is able to see, look and inform us in a very nice way. Well written David. Joan Smith

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Kevin Halls 14 April 2013

A well written poem David, and spot on too. As someone who loves the outdoors I agree with all what you have said. Well penned!

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Neela Nath Das 10 April 2013

Very true. Our idiocy is the cause of our doom.We are breaking the rhythm of Nature.we claim we are the most intelligent creature.Thanks for focusing on this burning problem.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 09 April 2013

Well written we are gliding and think about present so selfish we are Thanx David a good poem 4th and 5th stanza very bold

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Valerie Dohren 08 April 2013

Man is destroying his environment in the pursuit of wealth - great write David.

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Dave Walker 08 April 2013

A great poem as the years pass there is less to protect. In the end there will be nothing left.

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