This Depression Comments

Its awesome thanks for helping me Bye

you must keep on writing good luck

I really liked this one a lot prolly because i can relate to it so much...but I loved the words that you used and the way you used them keep on writing.....u are good

I feel you in this one....depression is everywhere. Deep poem...i like it ^_^ **Tyease**

Very Good, Lots of expression and thoughtful. =]

hi nice poem... i gave it a 10! ! !

I agree. Good work :)

i love it believe me i know how u feel i suffer from manic depression because im bipolar but this is a wonderful poem

good write, i feel ur pain. i have thoughts like these 2.

it's a very interesting piece the words come out with so much feeling but it' s like there is an under torrent to this piece like you couldn't put to words what you really ment, is this so? .. it's just a guess but all in all a very decent yet disturbing piece so much feeling so much resentment and yet so hard to understand the making of such grief.

very good piece.... i like how you can write down your feelings so well, not everyone can do that... -the devil's work is done-----------

very good piece.... i like how you can write down your feelings so well, not everyone can do that... -the devil's work is done-----------

A powerful and poignant poem Shayli! Very expressive! Thank U for sharing! ! *10*! ! Best wishes always! Friend Thad

You have attempted to describe the indescribable - and made quite a good fist of it too. Some strong black images and your last line is excellent. Glad you changed your mind. The problem with death, as Hamlet said so memorably, is that there's no going back. 'Aye there's the rub. For what dreams may come when we have shuffled off this moral coil must give us pause.' Good luck Shayli love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

This is very confessional, raw and unfogiving in its delivery. Its the bare facts of naked depression which I too know all too well about. What sometimes happens is that the sun is always there, you need to smash down the brick wall hiding it from you thus holding you in the shadow which is created. Remember, darkness as a shadow is only created when light is obscurred, but the light is always there. Always! Good Luck! VG

A very interesting piece, and a lot of good imagery, overall a pretty good work of poetry!

Amazing poem, you wrote this from the soul. I am giving you a 10 for this deep poem!

Nicely written, It seems to me you've quite masterfully expressed how deeply depression can affect people. Unfortunately the decision of death is all too often beheld as the only avenue out. I truly hope this isn't how you feel and is only a view from the outside looking in. Adam

wow i really liked it... very deep and i feel the same way im not gonna lie

naaw so beautifully ritten i been there and still am i kno wat its like to neva seem to b able to return i love you words they hold such power u got talent if u eva need anyone i am here