This Deep Blue Current Of A Dream Poem by DM W

This Deep Blue Current Of A Dream

Rating: 5.0


This deep blue current of a dream,
That flows gently through Time's ruins,
Seems to meander like a stream.
It creates new worlds from nothing.

Saturday, August 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,dream,poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 12 August 2020

Just revisiting a touch of poetry class and 10+. Great poem and read Dominic.

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Dominic Windram 10 August 2020

Thanks Shaun...yes short but hopefully sweet. I employed a fair measure of assonace

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Shaun Cronick 08 August 2020

Perfect so nice and neat. I like how you have worded your quatrain of creativity. 10+ and thanks for sharing Dominic.

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