Friday, December 4, 2020

This December Comments

Rating: 5.0

This December is neither cold nor dry
Those chilling dark nights are elusive.

Wishes are stuck up somewhere
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M. Asim Nehal
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Unwritten Soul 27 December 2020

What is winter if it is hot like summer, as if what is dream without dreamer. Hope thing fixed as winter still in its season

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 08 December 2020

So true, Asim ji! December does not seem to be like December at all. There is no trace of cold or the temperature coming down. It is still hot and humid. A perfect poem that exposes the truth of global warming........5 stars

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 December 2020

DJ admire your keen observation.You are a thinking poem.

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Anjandev Roy 06 December 2020

Such a wonderful write.........thank u, dear friend.....anjandev roy.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 December 2020

Stars are not twinkling.. wonderful! Beautifully put....5 stars

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2020

December cold if you want to feel in your bathroom under a shower do yourself shield here in CANADA come and share with me the chilly breeze the wet snow sheet the freezing of frost then you will say o sun come where have you been lost December is going fast lest for ages last life we can no longer live in a mask December go away fast don't for ever last

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 December 2020

In the month of December we should feel cold but due to global warming we neither feel cold nor feel hot. Using neither....nor you have so tactfully composed this poem that any poet or poetess will like it. Beautiful poem.

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Suzon Albert 04 December 2020

Inspired to write on December. Nice poem Sir

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Suzon Albert 04 December 2020

Super fine This December is neither cold nor dry Those chilling dark nights are elusive. Wishes are stuck up somewhere Neither flowing nor floating. The moon seems pale and frail Neither beaming nor gleeful.

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Shreya Hacks 04 December 2020

December at its best for cold with exception this year due to Corona it seems.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 December 2020

A very astute observation on December weather. Global warming brought a tremendous effect on the climate. Beautifully written couplet with great imagery. Five Stars! ! !

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Deluke Muwanigwa 04 December 2020

Lovely poem. No use praying homie. We gonna have to use science to reverse the damage or live scientifically so dont damage the environment. But yes even here we are fretting about global warming. Trump said its a hoax and commissioned coal mines. Nuff sed.

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2020

Well expressed thoughts and feelings, a beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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