This Day Comments

A day that stares at me, lures me, dares me, and scares me… It's true we live with this day forever! Top marks!

Yes every day just like a white sheet of paper for life. Every action performed becomes the writing for reaction on this to reap fruits of karma. Amazing philosophy is drawn here....10

Amazing flight of imagery is evident through out in the fast flow of the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

This day like a white crisp of paper This day like a fragrant champak flower - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Dares me and scares me with permutations Of all possibilities it could be- - - - - -A great poem with permutations of all possibilities of bringing brighter days.Thanks for sharing this lovely poem.

This day, like a white crisp sheet of paper This day, like a fragrant golden champak flower Stares at me Lures me Dares me...... great thoughts and meditation on the new day how it is daring to commit oneself to the new day with the new opportunities...... very nice poem. thank you very much dear poetess. tony