Tuesday, August 28, 2012

This Dark Half Of Mine Comments

Rating: 5.0

This dark half of mine
Its black lava floating through my spine
Burning with fierce intensity everything coming along its way
Its leaping tongue of flame ready to devour me whole
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Akhtar Jawad 28 September 2014

An universally true poem with deep thoughts.

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Karen Sinclair 22 October 2012

A poignant piece and i just adore...Under the shade of hope, a new happy self is born again....tyvm karen

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Sydney La Roche 27 September 2012

I enjoy how you put a positive spin on the end. All things are made of both darkness and light. It's only when we find balance that we find fulfilment. Beautiful read.

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Neela Nath Das 30 August 2012

We know there was the fairy, Hope in Pandora's box too. Otherwise, the pain of grief, despondency might bring more sorrow in our life.So, beautiful poem! .The usage of imagery is superb.

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Mark Dillon 29 August 2012

we all have our darker side, i guess thats what the duality of man is about, great poem.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 29 August 2012

A ray of sunshine bathes everything Under the shade of hope, a new happy self is born again. The life is all about the hope and determination..very effective poem..

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