Sunday, October 21, 2012

This Crashing Wave Comments

Rating: 4.7

A teardrop drips from cheek to chin
a beer drop hits the weakness within
my hollow heart and blankened mind
the bleeding soul
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Ray Quesada
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R.benjamin Abate 09 April 2013

I love a cold beer too, man. 'A beer drop hits the weakness within' nice internal rhyme there. You have flow in your writing. Another poem I enjoyed right here.

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Kamilla Davila 22 October 2012

Once I was read this I thought it was beautiful. EXCELLENT! !

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Maggie Munro 22 October 2012

Quirky extra onomatopoeic ps softened me up before the power of the wave hit. Sensational.

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