This Commercial World Poem by Shaun Cronick

This Commercial World

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This commercial world we live in,
So bloated with private enterprise.
Much shallower than money-oriented,
Just appalling avarice in disguise.

Tuesday, June 23, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: money,commercialism ,greed
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Rose Marie thank you for your superb comment which I most certainly agree with. Thanks again and take care.

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Shaun Cronick 01 July 2020

Leeann many thanks for your witty comment. And take care.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 June 2020

An incisive poem so very true. Our life and the world itself have been blanketed with the color of money and commercialism. Humanity is breathing the air of greediness. A powerful and perceptive write well conveyed.

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Leeann Azzopardi 24 June 2020

Ain't that the truth I wish the Joneses would stop so I can get ahead

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