Wednesday, February 1, 2006

This Cloaken Shroud. Comments

Rating: 4.5

The more and more I do contrive
To try and keep my brain alive
I am beset with stumbling blocks
Across my path like granite rocks
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Graham Jones
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Aly Black 01 February 2006

Cool poem! Good Feeling, just alittle dark for me.

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Charles Chaim Wax 01 February 2006

an amazing inner narrative the honesty uplifting as is the courage for who has not lived in the cave no light in sight yet to go on because our duty is to gather joy into our heart a fine poem

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