Saturday, July 23, 2011

This City! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Trapped in a tarnished city of gold,
The glory gone with the years,
We need to find something else to hold,
Besides the bitter sting of our own tears.
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Chris Haifley
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 July 2011

Nice poem. Fine and vivid imagery. Great sentiments. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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