This Chaotic World Comments

hi That was a good one and yes felt a dit depressed but that i think should be a compliment. As the feelings came up automatically while reading the poem. this is best of all u r other poems.

I feel like I wanna cry... It just reminds me sooo much of my ex-girlfriend: ( Seriously: '( Great poem though: D LOL 10+ for making me cry! XD

what a great piece...! ! ! nicely writtinen...good job..and keep it up^^^ yours.. DaNa... ^_^

its deperssing dark dour and forboding....melancholy...devoid of hope...written in desperation and a receding sane state....dont mind all these words....the poetry is great...its the load it carries that is immense burden for a little girl...for thats how i see you....you have depicted a state verywell indeed more in a msg happiness to you i wish and cheers

nicely written.........chaotic world really......... good work ;)

YOURS CONTAINS CHOAS, AND MINE CONTAINS EVERY TYPE OF DRAMA YOU CAN IMAGINE, A WRITER 4M MY TRUE HEART..LOVELY..GAVE YOU N IT A 10, MY NEW FRIEND