This Cell
Five foot wide only this room extends,
Six foot long this barren room it ends,
A windowless hell of pure stagnation,
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An insightful portrayal of life in prison nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Thanks for sharing, Neil.
Oh sad poem, Come out of the cell that is of your own creation and face the outcome it may be ugly in the beginning but later all will be well
The dark shines fear on the hardest criminals, Sleeping in fits and starts a truth in actuals, Crying at 3am wishing to just be safely home, We tire of being isolated and sovery alone, guilt and loneliness, isolation. very fine poem. tony
Congratulations for this being selected as poem of the day! Stanza seven may be the best one.
This cell, my cell, I am dead in my reality, This life, my life, I am my very own fatality.....excellent introspective poem.....beautiful expressive...... congrats.....10++ this body is cell this mind is cell this world is cell if I'm there as guilty..... but if I live there as free bird doing welfare then this makes me pleasure enjoyer..........
What a very good written poem and giving us all an insight into it.
Cell life with discussions on crimes no love and care all long for at dinner time, one is indeed destined to spend all life as locked in a box in this world a pity all feel about reaading this Poem. Congrats to the Poet for the selection of poem as Member Poem of the Day by PH!
Powerful poem...that conveys the sheer wretchedness of the prison experience. With this in mind, I wholeheartedly recommend ' The Ballad of Reading Gaol' by Oscar Wilde. Anyway, I digress... congratulations Nell. It's definitely a 10 from me! !
Interesting perspective. Seems like you're in a bad place. Yet, somehow this place was an ideal place for a great write. Thanks for sharing. Also, congrats on the poem being chosen as 'POD'. Well deserved.
In prison or in lonely hours one is forced to contemplate, comes face to face with stark ugly realities of life. Very vivid sketch of some one going through soul searching. Congratulations.
This cell, my cell, I am dead in my reality, This life, my life, I am my very own fatality....so touching and impressive. Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.
An excellent write. A vivid depiction of a prison cell and life of a prisoner. Compelling imagery and great rhyme. Congratulations for a truly deserved accolade!
Chain and pain! ! This Cell; Prison, Loneliness. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
An open and honest poem, I feel your words. A well deserved POD. Congratulations dear Nell.
A well crafted poem of the day. Congrats, dear Ma'am Nell for being picked...10+++++++++++++
sadness prevails reading such a cellular poetry I thought you meant black berry
Touching expiation and soliloquy of a once hardened criminal kept in a cell wonderfully portrayed. A well deserved poem of the day. Congrats.