Thursday, June 16, 2011

This Bus Carries Only Two Souls To Two Destinations! Comments

Rating: 5.0

The beautiful teenage singing Nun,
We traveled together in an empty bus!
I understood her secret dialogue;
'You smell of liquor and why you drink? '
...
Read full text

nimal dunuhinga
COMMENTS
Tai Chi Italy 16 June 2011

Each to our own temple, springs verily to mind here nimal! A beautiful insight smiling at you Tai

0 0 Reply
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 16 June 2011

I liked it. Great poem written very well with nice texture and imagery. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A farmer' on page 1.

0 0 Reply
nimal dunuhinga

nimal dunuhinga

kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
Close
Error Success