Sunday, June 8, 2008

This Burdened Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

This burdened heart speaks low but clear
That today destiny’s lanes are not very clear;
That pain, like rain, can mist up the eyes
That clouds, like pain can block out the skies
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Rani Turton
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Ashraful Musaddeq 19 September 2008

Wonderfully composed poem. The last stanza is very nice.10+

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Broken Peaces 19 June 2008

This is a little sad but so well put together, felt a lot in common with this piece 10 Chris

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