Tuesday, March 30, 2010

This Bread I Break Comments

Rating: 3.1

This bread I break was once the oat,
This wine upon a foreign tree
Plunged in its fruit;
Man in the day or wine at night
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Dylan Thomas
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T R Suresh 13 March 2017

Line 6 appears to we incorrectly worded. It should be Once in this wine the summer blood

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Michael Shapiro 10 April 2016

Verse 2 line 1, CORRECTED, reads: Once in this wine the summer blood. The word time is extraneous, and does NOT appear in Collected Poems.

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Fabrizio Frosini 31 July 2016

- good note. Thank you Michael

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Brian Jani 26 April 2014

Awesome I like this poem, check mine out

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