Monday, January 28, 2013

This Blue Moon Comments

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My heart is already broken! No more damage can you do!
In the symphony of madness, I sang the same to you.
But in this dueling duet of agony, who was teaching who?
This familiar song I thought I wrote, now claimed by someone new.
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Little King Of Sorrows 28 January 2013

Thank you for sharing that with me... I now read it both ways and never would have thought of that. I will leave it as is, but thank you for giving me a new prospective on it: -)

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 28 January 2013

when I read this poem from the last line to the first line, it seems to be very beautiful, The way you have written this poem is still wonderful!

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