Monday, February 6, 2006

This Bitter Champagne Comments

Rating: 4.3

Sweetest lie I’ve ever heard-
A blank shadow of the deepest word.
Turned from champagne to vinegar on your tongue-
Spilling from a mouth that’s far too young.
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Jessy Liz
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Goldy Locks 22 September 2006

wow. great. just great. flow, words.

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William Jackson 07 February 2006

Jessy, I liked it. It made me think the tongue is a fire that few can tame, and words once said are hard to take back.

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