Tuesday, July 15, 2008

This Altered State Of Mind Comments

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I sit here in my altered state of mind, the beautiful face I once stared at with such lust and love now seems to fill my heart with disgust and despair, altered in a sense by this poison flowing through my cold veins.

You seem ugly, mishapen, changed into something I hate and yet you still have the glow that I love…is that odd, does it seem weird that something so vile, seems to attract me, is it the power you could have over me as I lay here or is it the thought of your death that entices me?
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Yami Tenshi 24 July 2008

Very twisted..... in a good way! I love how it starts off with confusion over whether you love the person or hate them, and then you begin to show your affection more and more. Nice similes....^_^

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