Monday, November 5, 2012

This Aimless Song Comments

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I rake the air,
For the image now gone,
A faded memory,
An unknown treasure,
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Stan Petrovich 10 January 2013

Could not help but to think about Jack London when I read your poem, Aimless. It was the spitting image of his misadventures on the Snark!

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Prasanna Kumari 05 November 2012

the journey through the aimless song was gripping...good

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