Friday, May 30, 2014

Thirty Dolphins Came Ashore Comments

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Common dolphins came ashore,
Maybe thirty or more,
On this beach in Brazil,
People showed a will.
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Stephen Katona
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Ruth Walters 19 June 2015

You could write a children's story book in poetry :)

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Valsa George 17 August 2014

You seem to be very fond of Dolphins.... Among your poems, I saw many titles on Dolphin.... Yes, they are such lovely creatures! If we observe them, we can see greater warmth among animals than in some humans! A very earnest plea at the end which adds to the beauty of the poem!

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Brian Jani 09 June 2014

Nice and imaginative poem

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 May 2014

very heartfelt write, we all must endeavor to be kind to all creatures and inspire kindness in others. I'm with you in this concern Stephen.

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