Thirteenth Floor Comments

If one can see so much beauty in the wind, wind again, wind again, wind only expanse of unending blue, then there is all reason to plunge into it or just be there to witness it. So, pray don't jump - but keep writing. You have great flair, a penchant for haunting imagery. So, here is an insufficient 10, which is all that I am permitted to give.

in the first and 2nd stanzas the subject is ''I'' [= your ''ego''? ]. In the final stanza it's ''YOU''.. [= sort of ''alter ego''? ] I'm asking: is it such a sort of psycological duplicity what you really want to mean?

Look behind and beyond from 13th floor, everything will be imagined for beautiful poem writing like this. Very nice.