Sunday, July 28, 2019

Thirsty Comments

Rating: 4.8

I am just immersed in a pond
River is my solicitude
Ocean is my dream
Unto which wonderful fathom
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DEEPAK KUMAR PATTANAYAK
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2019

Six wonderful lines that capture desire... A thirst for something that we usually cannot obtain in life. Powerful and thought provoking write. Well penned.

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Many many thanks Rose.......I am humbled

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Rajnish Manga 28 July 2019

Simply brilliant. Beauty and brevity celebrating the joy of being oneself. Thanks.

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Many many thanks Rajnishji....I am truly humbled

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