They rise to life with sundown,
Spreading their wings lazily,
Moving around with grace and beauty,
They drink to the shadows of the night
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The first part of this poem has langour that I gave in to when reading it. Then it grows more intense and sombre. But all of it has rich texture, which I thoroughly enjoyed. Regards, Julia
I gave you a 10, a very beautiful and intense piece of writing, I hope you post more! ~~Elya Thorn~~