Friday, July 3, 2015

Thirst Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sound of jingling cow bells
The lilts of heavenly music from a flute
An exotic fragrance in the air
Here I stand, Enticed
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Valsa George
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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 December 2022

This excellent poem disseminates the message that true love is pure, pious and divine...Jai Shree Krishna!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 July 2019

The love and pain among Radha and Krishna has been so touchingly and captivatingly delineated in a special way by you. Brilliant poem.10

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Gorgeous, well expressed, Thirst is a need of water, Hunger is a taste of food.

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Kelly Kurt 10 July 2015

I enjoy all your works, Valsa. I will kook up this legend on Google. I have many poet/friends from India and I love to read of the perspective, society, culture, religions and tales. Especially when they are written in such lovely form. I saw that your popularity soared with over 1400 hits today. Well deserved! Thank you for sharing. Peace

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Savita Tyagi 10 July 2015

You have repainted the portrait of Radha Krishna in you beautiful words. Enjoyed this variation of style.

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Kavya . 06 July 2015

marvellous...you have so nicely expressed the true bonding and love of Radha Krishna in a very subtle way

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Akhtar Jawad 05 July 2015

An entirely different poem by Valsa, liked the style in which Valsa described this beautiful love.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 04 July 2015

Uncoil in a rhythmic dance to the enticing music of the magical flute. A beautiful depiction of the mesmerizing love.

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You have become Radha by finding her. Beautiful poem! (10)

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 04 July 2015

Radha and Krishna poems - no matter how many lines you write seem so few. Brindhavan is where i was when i read such beautiful lines. It is from pure Love, such untouched love can flow.

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Lyn Paul 03 July 2015

A delightful flow of words. Enjoyed so much. Highlighted with a beautiful picture. Thank you

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 July 2015

Woah sensational and I like the Indian flavour of this nice poem. Romantic n appealing. Thumbs up.

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Ramesh Kavdia 03 July 2015

Awesome expression of feelings and emotions.

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Hazel Durham 03 July 2015

So beautifully expressed with the stunning scene so vivid and enticing with the charms of the East so powerfully portrayed!

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