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On a warming June,
the twins are still at play.
So many degrees past noon,
she wish to frolic the water as they.
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Very vivid imagery, rhythm and emotional intensity displayed within your poem. When the lion appears, water is scarce once more, emanates a picture of Africa within my mind, the animals hoping for rain to come soon to appease their thirst. Excellent and picturesque, a unique portrait of nature. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn
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10/27/2025 12:41:14 AM # 1.0.0
The poem is a very good depiction of the inserted picture. A lovely poem nicely penned with insight. Thanks for sharing Jaxsun.