Friday, July 19, 2013

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A bird so small, that’s what I am;
Name me puny, that’s all I have;
My feeble wings are all in all;
To encourage me at every fall.
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Chinedu Dike 01 March 2018

An insightful rendition embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A well texted and nicely thought-out poem. Thanks for sharing Indranil.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 June 2017

A bird so small, that’s what I am; Name me puny, that’s all I have; Reverie of thought swims my mind; Lutheran confessions rule my dreams. I have dreams…….. my treasure. These are the points i collected from your poem after reading it carefully. Thank you very much for your poem. It is a sign of your brilliant mind. tony

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 July 2013

Beautiful poem..Loved reading it.. After the leap in Mary's lap...will shake all leaves of maple cap..Thanks.

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Indranil Bhaduri 19 July 2013

Very nice penned. Loved it.

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Dave Walker 19 July 2013

A great tribute to a friend. A great poem.

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