Shall I thirst your love now
That cascading love,
From a mountain of your heart.
Fills this pond's soul
Where I can see my flushed face,
On the crystal surface of your love
Shall I drink that elixir of love
For this heart is thirsty.
Love is free, it has no monetary vallue... Yet it is worth more than we can possibly imagine... Very nice poem...
Shall I drink that elixir of love... Nice feelings Vipins..
love is the only thing, which tend us to live.............with the most beautiful words you did it well
To wish for love, to indulge yourself in it. truly a interesting outlook.
Exceptional and exquisite lovely poem of yours! In one phrase it simply captured my heart! Kudos!
I am not worthy to be reading this poem of perfection........
Dear Vipins, Again and again your producing love magic what is the secret enigma behind your love logical poems. This poem proved history repeats itself again and again as your love poems one by one are competing on each other to emerge as winners. But I say, most of your love poems belong to heaven's lane...... I enjoyed these lines of the poem..... 'Where I can see my flushed face, On the crystal surface of your love Shall I drink that elixir of love' Great vippins you have gleat hand in writing love poetry. Thanks for sharing poems like these............Cheerio for now........ Hope to catch your poems soon again..... For this heart is thirsty.'
I'm really enjoying your latest posts! Beautiful work, strong and emotional. I love this.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The common natural setting of you poems and the flow of water between them is quite enlightening. The result is quenching our thirst for the poetic form.