Tuesday, May 1, 2018

Third View Of The Earth Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her father saw her from the top of infinity,
her plan was just an insignificant point!
But He could not ignore the point object,
she grew in her arms and grown in a charming gale.
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Akhtar Jawad
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What a wonderful imaginative write. Excellent and pure poetry! 10

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Kelly Kurt 02 May 2018

Your style, along with your intelligence and grace, made this a delight to read.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 May 2018

A lovely poem! Liked the last two lines most! Thanks for sharing...10

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Khalid Saifullah 02 May 2018

Great poem, third view or the isometric view gives more details of a technical drawing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 May 2018

Let the humans love to spring the colors of love, let the father be thankful of his sons for odors of love........let it be. A high imaginative poem touchingly expressed. Thank u ji.10

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Robert Murray Smith 01 May 2018

An imaginative write from the space of a poet.I love poems about the Earth. Well penned dear poet.+++10

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